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One-sided love

Posted by the lonely wanderer on 1:36 AM




Life is beautiful,
but seems very awful


When pains are created,
and tears are shed


As love prevails over,
without the agreement of lover


This is called one-sided love,
which results in trough


Thus a mere looser walks,
as the whole life sucks


Without any senses working,
but with every step heart is crumbling.

5 Comments

Ankit B. Rathod says:
August 6, 2009 at 3:28 AM

Nice one.... u wrote it?

the lonely wanderer says:
August 6, 2009 at 4:32 AM

thnks..
na i din wrte it....

ElOelCooter says:
August 6, 2009 at 6:12 AM

True love shouldn't make you feel small. True love will let one's lover be free. True love doesn't possess. While it may hurt some, true love will walk away with a tear in its eye, if need be. True love will have a smile on its face while that tear is in its eye. True love will give up all, including itself, to let its lover be fulfilled.

the lonely wanderer says:
August 6, 2009 at 10:31 PM

i cmpletely agree vith u...nice

Amit Kumar Singh says:
August 11, 2009 at 2:56 AM

nice poem :)
I would like to decifer it as....
Pain and tears are thorns of the rosy plant of love. An integrated view can make it more beautiful. love is not agreement; it is spontaneous.

"This is called one-sided love,
which results in trough"

one-sided love is creating depression.

But i feel, there is nothing like one-sided love. Love is state of ur being.

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